For this assignment, I interviewed my parents and grandparents. I asked them questions about themselves and our family's cultural and historical background.While interviewing my dad, I learned that my parents had determined "An Khương" for me before I was even born. My
Vietnamese name has two parts, and both have different meanings. "An"
means peace and "Khương" means success. What's even cooler is both my older brother and younger sister have Vietnamese names that when combined with mines, translates to a successful and peaceful family who's dreams come true.
My dad gave me this nickname because I bear so much resemblance to him that it reminds him of his childhood. Both of these words come from the names of two towns in Vietnam where my dad grew up ; Hoi An and Hoa Khương. I learned that my grandma was also born in Hoi An and that my grandpa was born in Hoa Khương. With this in mind, I have a clearer understanding and knowledge of the memories and connections that "An Khương" has.
"An Khương" does not only have impact on my dad and his parents, but also our family as a whole. It is a reminder of our ancestors, family background, and who we are. With this in mind, I understand the meaning and value of my Vietnamese name; remembering and cherishing my Vietnamese name forever.
Gia Mẫn - An Khương - Như Ý
An intelligent, successful, and peaceful family who's dreams come true.
Your essay was very interesting. I like how your nickname is in a foreign language and has a greater meaning. What you could add is memories/examples of your nickname being used. Also dont start with "interviewed." Overall good essay.
ReplyDeleteThe intro was kind of weak. Try to start it off with a quote, or a fact about your family, remember it is a personal essay so make it relate to you. But I liked how you incorporated your siblings names too to make sense to your name. Also I liked how you have multiple resources as well. Overall a very good and interesting essay.
ReplyDeleteAS(2-) GREAT WORD THAT YOU HAVE CHOSEN TO WRITE ABOUT. MY SUGGESTION, TRY TO START WITH A BETTER INTRO. REMEMBER WHAT I SAID DON'T ACTUALLY STATE THAT YOU INTERVIEWED YOUR PARENTS BUT WORK THE ANSWERS INTO YOUR ESSAY. YOU HAVE GREAT STORIES TO SHARE, BUT TRY TO STICK TO ONE THAT INCLUDES THE WORD, SHARE THAT STORY (LIKE YOU ARE TELLING US THE STORY) AND THEN GO INTO THE REFLECTION LIKE YOU HAVE IN YOUR ESSAY THAT DISCUSSES WHY THE WORD IS SO SPECIAL TO YOU, WHY IT IS UNIQUE ETC.
ReplyDelete