My protective covering shelters our deal.
I contain your basic daily needs.
My zipper seals what you dont want seen nor known.
Only you have access to what belongs and what doesn't.
I'll eventually rip, tear, and fade,
but I'll support you to the best of my abilities.
You may throw me around
misplace me, or even forget about me.
I am there for you wherever you go.
Carrying your necessities
I hold what could be important
But at times, I may be in the way.
I'm not useful just for storage.
I am there when no one is
You can always lean on me
for rest and for comfort.
I am a back pack.
I honestly really love your last three stanzas. However, in your first stanza, I don't really understand how some of it applies to real life. I'm not sure of what you mean by "Only you have access to what belongs and what doesn't." Also, your second line is a bit redundant when you say basic twice. It's only minor things that shouldn't be hard to fix. Well done! :D
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