The review of studies indicated that cyber bullying was consistently associated with an increased likelihood of depression. Investigators discovered the most common strategies adolescents used to cope with cyber bullying were passive, such as blocking the sender, ignoring or avoiding messages, and protecting personal information. In contrary, for some teens, cigarette smoking relaxes them, providing a temporary escape from stress and anxiety. But cell phones and computers themselves are not to blame for cyber bullying. Social media sites can be used for positive activities, like connecting kids with friends and family, helping students with school, and for entertainment. The more reasonable link to teen depression is the lack of emotional support from people closest to the teen. The main issue causing the disaster is their state of mind. The feeling of worthlessness makes the single teen think that they don't deserve to live and that unhealthy treatment to themselves is right.
"Social media is a ubiquitous extension in the lives of young people, with reports indicating 95 percent of American teenagers use the Internet and that 81 percent of them use social media" (Nauert)
The Constant ridicule and torment can also have lasting effects on youth’s sense of how they identify and react to problems. In addition, children who are bullied may go on to harm others. The buildup of resent to the abuser makes the person want to strike back. The humility draws the victim to have intrusive thoughts of aggressive harm to others. This mindset makes the adolescent go crazy and often resulting in hostile behavior. They'll feel agitated, restless, or even violent. Their tolerance level is low, short tempered, and everything and everyone gets on their nerves.
A recent study by the US National Institutes of Health, reported by Reuters, found that victims of cyber bullying showed more signs of depression than other bullying victims. Depression can have a number of serious effects on a person’s life. Teens who are depressed may say they want to be dead or may talk about suicide. They feel that suicide is a deserved punishment or that the world would be a better place without their existence. "The article, by researchers Jeffrey A. Bridge and others, examined the risk factors concerning adolescent suicide. Bridges found that approximately 15% to 25% of teens have thoughts of suicide through adolescence, from minor thoughts of death to actual suicide plans. "Similar to drug use and cutting, suicide is often thought of as an “escape” from symptoms of depression or problems plaguing the teenager. But unlike drug use and cutting, this escape is sought as a permanent solution"(All Psychology Careers)
Cyber bullying is nothing new. Social media sites like Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook are all popular sites for connecting friends but are also commonly used to commit the act of cyber bullying. Anyone involved in the latest social media sites and apps are all likely to get hurt online. Studies found that those involved in any sort of bullying were at greater risk for depression whether the behavior was physical violence or verbal taunts. Online or offline, parents and adults should be more aware of their child's internet use. Teens who become depressed because of online harassment complicate their health to far more critical health risks. The lack of emotional support influences substance abuse, intrusive thoughts about others, and self harm. Being involved in an adolescents life and supporting them will help them deal with difficult experiences appropriately through the stages of change.
Citation
"Teen Depression." All Psychology Careers. All Psychology Careers. nd. Web. 31 Aug. 2015Nauert, Rick. "Teen Cyber Bullying Linked To Depression." Psych Central. Psych Central. 23 Jun. 2015 Web. 31 Aug. 2015
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ReplyDeleteI liked your essay but it had some minor flaws. Your intro paragraph I think contained too much information (a lot of commas) I like the first topic sentence, it drew me in, but the excess information wasn't really needed. Your body paragraphs did pretty good at conveying your purpose, and the quotes were a good variety and well chosen. Your conclusion good but it could convey your topic a little more tho and have a stronger lasting thought. Overall it was a good essay to read.
When I read it I saw what Kainoa was talking about. That the beginning into was a little lengthy and kind of packed with a lot of information that maybe can be saved for the body paragraphs or even removed. For example when you said "Electronic devices include cell phones, computers, and tablets as well as communication apps like social networks, text message, and chat." I think that if you had removed that, that it would stay on topic a little better. But your body paragraphs really went on a smooth path and was easy to follow because of the transitions you used and word choice. So great job! I also found that you had a lot of good quotes that told exactly what you wanted to tell. In the end I really got a great message and awareness.
ReplyDeleteIN YOUR INTRODUCTION MAKE SURE THAT EVERYTHING IS COMPLETELY EXPLAINED BEFORE MOVING ON TO THE NEXT IDEA. EX"Adolescents who reported being bullied online are at an increased risk for depression. Depression from cyber bullying links to negative mental health, worsening to suicidal attempts, harm to others and substance abuse." YOU ONLY HAVE ONE SENTENCE INTRODUCING YOUR SUBTOPIC OF DEPRESSION BEFORE STATING THESIS. YOU NEED TO EXPLAIN IT A BIT MORE HOW DEPRESSION IS LINKED TO CYBERBULLYING.
ReplyDeleteREMEMBER TO ADDRESS COUNTER ARGUMENTS (AGAINST YOUR SIDE). YOUR BODY PARAGRAPHS NEED TO EXPLAIN EACH SUPPORTING REASON THAT IS STATED IN YOUR THESIS. AND YOU NEED TO HAVE AT THE LEAST TWO PIECES OF EVIDENCE PER BODY PARAGRAPH. EVIDENCE NEEDS TO BE FACTS/STATISTICS/RESEARCH THAT PROVES YOUR OPINIONS TO BE CORRECT NOT JUST SOMEONE ELSE SAYING WHAT YOU COULD HAVE SAID. AS(2)